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#1 Hell - poem
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Do mind you its dark, and its what i was aiming for.


ashes falling from the sky
unable to see from my own eye
through the raging fires of hate
beholds hell's true gate

the crys of agony fill the air
satan feeding on their despair
the pain that people create
has been the fuel to this date

there is no love left here
its almost too little to bear
god has left his people to die
sitting on his throne as they cry
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like woah ~ it is dark yet your play with words all fit.

curious as to what drove you to write this?
come to think about it, these could be new lyrics to a metal track!


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yea i have a friend that wants to write some notes :p
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it sounds like you're writing about the current state of the world.

What would you do if we all knew the devil as lucifer instead of satan? Wouldn't that mess up the rhyming a bit?

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@Blue - "Lucifer" is a good name, it means 'bringer of light'
(that archangel lost the title being more of the bringer of darkness)
wiggles could use devil, evil, etc... and it would still work in this poem
since it's not an ending word to rhyme with.
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The Beast would be a possibility too
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yes all those would work, Lucifer takes some time to say and slows down the tempo tho.
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i'm happy to see there's a voice along with those brains
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@ken - i have a few more if your interested.
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