LOGIN
SEARCH
PROFILE
keys: ↑ ↓
LOGOUT
INDEX
MEMBERS
keys: ↑ ↓
HOME
PORTAL
PLAY ALONG
PLAY with WORDS
PLAY with GRAPHICS
PLAY with SOUNDS
PLAY with CODES
PLAY with PROJECTS
keys: ← →
Guest Access
Register:
Members:



View previous topic View next topic Go down Message [Page 1 of 1]

Active Member
Active Member
#1 A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
Gently, I stroke her hair
Without her, I would be in despair
Through the eternal love I give
The perpetual felicity I gain

someone wanna help me finish off this poem...? I cbf......
Active Member
Show Signature
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
#2 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

BluE

C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
profile
I dunno, if you're talking about your gf then
"Gives me more for to live"?
C.O.R.N.
Show Signature


Want a real challenge? Try [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

If you read this message, please PM me. this is a test. And I'm serious, this isnt just some lousy time wasting paragraph that I wrote just to fill in my signature. It's here for a reason. PM ME.
C.O.R.N.
http://51s-seedy-masteroogway.blogspot.com
Active Member
Active Member
#3 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
... Erm.... Solid effort....?

Hey, talk to me tomorrow!!!
Active Member
Show Signature


I am the Rubiks Revenge.
And Kira1004 (Killer Angel)

Epic Asianezzzzz [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
#4 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

mr_wiggles

EVENTALIST
 EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
profile
Through the eternal love I give
The perpetual felicity I gain

Reworded

Through the eternal love I gave
The perpetual felicity I crave

? yes ?
EVENTALIST
Show Signature
EVENTALIST
Active Member
Active Member
#5 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
Nice one!
I feel stupid for not thinking of that now 0.0
Active Member
Show Signature


I am the Rubiks Revenge.
And Kira1004 (Killer Angel)

Epic Asianezzzzz [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
Community Moderator
Community Moderator
#6 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

GeMinEye

Community Moderator
Community Moderator
Community Moderator
profile
The dog is happy.
The dogs brown.
Like a dog walks it shall

I am so pro
Community Moderator
Show Signature


Check out my story:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]


Community Moderator


[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
WE WILL RULE THE WORLD!
Community Moderator
http://dezrealah.tumblr.com/
Active Member
Active Member
#7 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
... Pro you are.....
Hmm.... Now that I read it, this poem is ridiculously bad....
Active Member
Show Signature


I am the Rubiks Revenge.
And Kira1004 (Killer Angel)

Epic Asianezzzzz [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
#8 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

mr_wiggles

EVENTALIST
 EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
profile
even with my suggested rewording?
EVENTALIST
Show Signature
EVENTALIST
Active Member
Active Member
#9 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
hmm... Well, the rhymes are ok... But the structure is crap... just..... I feel like a retard...
Can we detelete topics?
Active Member
Show Signature


I am the Rubiks Revenge.
And Kira1004 (Killer Angel)

Epic Asianezzzzz [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
#10 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

mr_wiggles

EVENTALIST
 EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
profile
yea you can, but why just cause you things its stupid? you can take a look at some of the posts/topics i made and even tho i think a few are stupid i don't go back and start deleting them, what is your main concern that some one will come by and start trolling? that's why the mods like gface, myself and calvin are here. Smile
EVENTALIST
Show Signature
EVENTALIST
Active Member
Active Member
#11 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

Kira1004

Active Member
Active Member
Active Member
profile
I am afraid that someone will read this and mock my intelligence.
Or even think less of me....
Active Member
Show Signature


I am the Rubiks Revenge.
And Kira1004 (Killer Angel)

Epic Asianezzzzz [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Active Member
http://www.mycomposition.net
EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
#12 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

mr_wiggles

EVENTALIST
 EVENTALIST
EVENTALIST
profile
no one on this site will do that, you don't have to worry. Smile
EVENTALIST
Show Signature
EVENTALIST
C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
#13 Re: A poem... (first one on this site) yay xD
Loading

BluE

C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
C.O.R.N.
profile
lol *remembers embaressing retarded topics that I made
CRINGE
C.O.R.N.
Show Signature


Want a real challenge? Try [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

If you read this message, please PM me. this is a test. And I'm serious, this isnt just some lousy time wasting paragraph that I wrote just to fill in my signature. It's here for a reason. PM ME.
C.O.R.N.
http://51s-seedy-masteroogway.blogspot.com

Sponsored content

profile

View previous topic View next topic Back to top Message [Page 1 of 1]

 

Chatbox system disabled
Personal messaging disabled