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It was a normal day. The sun was shining. Everyone was working. Carrying their loads on their backs. Everyone lived in the same communal hall. It was large enough to fit several thousand occupants.

BOOM

Everyone stopped in their tracks.

BOOM

No-one needed telling.

BOOM

Everyone ran for their lives.

What was peace seconds ago was now chaos. Everyone was running to the protected hall. Many wouldn't make it. Suddenly with a loud CRUNCH some one was crushed. Crushed between the floor and the foot of the giant. The giant emitted a strange sound that seemed to go up and down.
The beast disposed many other in the same fashion as the first. The shrieks of the half-dead and the twitching of the dying was horrific. Splatters of gore lay on the floor beside the twisted ruined remains of the dead.
After it had crushed the fleeing bodies, the giant looked at the rest of those fleeing. It then removed a see through circle from it's pocket. The giant positioned the circle above someone. A shaft of heat descended from the circle and slowly incinerated the person.
It tried the run from the burning ray of light. But the giant was faster. The person exploded in a shower of blood and flesh. The persons body sizzled like freshly cooked meat. It's head had remained undamaged and was now shuddering and convulsing as the severed neck spurted fluid.
The giant again emitted the same up down sound. It stomped onwards to treat others in the same way. Several victims later it seemed to become bored of what seemed to it, such a meaningless death and decided to kill the fleeing persons slower. In a way this was good. More people would live to work for the community.
The giant picked up a struggling body. It examined the figure in it's hand. It reached down and tore off one of the persons legs. The shrieks and screams assaulted the ears of the living. They heard as the victim was slowly and painfully tortured. They heard the CRACK as the victims body was partially torn in half then crushed. Yet the victim was still alive. The giant lay the dying being on the ground and watched it spasm around, dragging it's entrails on the ground, making a line of blood and guts.

By now everyone was in the sheltered hall. It was dark. The giant, being unable to reach the others had decided to smash the roof in. How original.

After hours of work, the hole was cleared out. everyone was clear to go back to work. First was to retrieve the dead and take them back.

When the first worker arrived at the scene of the massacre, it saw the dozens of mutilated bodies on the ground. The messed bodies of ants. Ants, which humans regard as small nothings. Even less then nothing. To humans, the lives of ants are things to play with. And destroy.
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Just hoping some one gets the message
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The message is: Watch where you step? Haha.
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@m watching where u step is not the same as intensionly causing the suffering of living creatures!

@Blue, well put my man... I got the message Smile
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@M: Well, I guess that could be it... I didn't know the message I was trying to get at. LoL. I guess it's sorta like, don't kill for the fun of it? or maybe, humans regard small things worthless? dunno *shrug*

@Endo-K: ah really?
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maybe, humans regard small things worthless? dunno *shrug*
We're selfish. I'm pretty sure thats why we have a built conscience of whats good and bad, but im sure animals have that too. Ehh, I guess we're just advanced.
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yeah selfish is a good way to put it.
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To be honest I kinda guessed it was about ants like a few lines down.
So did u watch A Bugs Life of somthing b4 u wrote that?
Yeah I got the message... U basiclly said it at the end... I do find it to be byest 2wards humans tho. What I mean is that not everyone is like that.
But u are right... Alot of us can be very cruel and it isnt right.
U really put the reader in the shoes of the ants too, which is great. Because anyone that does this would not like it, if it was done to them... Obviouly.. At least that was the impression I got anyway.
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@The bugs life thing: Yeah, it was a good movie. C: old times
When I said that they destroy the lives of *insert insect* (in this case ants) I was trying to say sorta like, we take lives of smaller beings without much thought even though they are much like us. They endure the daily struggle for life. :0
Yeah, thanks for compliment (putting reader in shoes of ants).
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>.> orly? I got bored. as you can see with so many new topics I made. loooooooool
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lol I didnt feel a connection until the detailed violence kicked in. Which was almost immediatly. Thats sad really...
It seemed more like the start of a movie. U know, because ur kinda waiting for somthing to disturb the normality.
I got it like this.. It was a normal day... This is getting boring, 3 lines.
BOOM!.. excuse for gore.
And so the point u were tring to make where the ants endure the daily struggle for life like we do is extremly distracted.
...But u got the considerate message across tho.
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ah k?
I'm not sure about "detailed gore". It was more like "generallly what it looked like".
Detailed gore describes each part. right?
Eh. The point was. "We don't care for things that are smaller then our finger". EG. Would you rather kill an ant or a large spider? Why?
Or it could have been "Humans are cruel to certain animals" or "We invented animal rights but it doesn't help ants".
It can be alot of things. "The" message is more then one. It's good you got a message though. so did M. Not sure about ken. He might be in just for the death and emo-sisty of it..... bluuuuuuu....
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@Blue

I'm not sure about "detailed gore". It was more like "generallly what it looked like".
Detailed gore describes each part. right?

The giant picked up a struggling body. It examined the figure in it's hand. It reached down and tore off one of the persons legs. The shrieks and screams assaulted the ears of the living. They heard as the victim was slowly and painfully tortured. They heard the CRACK as the victims body was partially torn in half then crushed. Yet the victim was still alive. The giant lay the dying being on the ground and watched it spasm around, dragging it's entrails on the ground, making a line of blood and guts.


rofl Dont u think ur contradicting urself a little?
Also about the hidden messages.. Anything I read, watch, play etc, can trigger those thoughts.
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oh.... well... I meant like, even more detailed all I said was crushed, torn and spasm
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