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just descriptive writing, freestyle.. as the thought came to me - it i wrote it..

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i woke up today with the heat of midday barring on me, the stinging brightness of a 45 degree angle into my eyes, i cannot see. the random chimey chime from my phone, focuses my attention and i stumble like a grumpy peg-legged pirate to the nearest loo. Refreshed and renewed, i dressed for the day and what it might throw at me. stab of sadness reminded me of my lost bicycle, so i changed , and then changed again until my fit found its fit which had me finally walking into the shoes that required the least amount of effort.

two cups of h2o and then two cups of joe, then onto cleaning long forgotten obvious places, and finding buried treasure along the way, coins and gum, followed by my "swagger" two days without it, kept me at a distance from fellow co-workers. my hair product appeared last, finally. freshly washed and now necessary to towel dry. my mock brucelee had its daily waxing.

longhair

hopefully it inspires our friend Mr. Skull here to share with us his literary genius..
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@swoop - I really enjoyed this thought

as I began to read... I began to feel, your choice of words staged the right emotion
for the daily routine and how thoughts are triggered by the little things along the way.
I took it as "long hair" was not only a state of mind but the center of a small joy from
being surrounded by everyone's trail with "it is what it is" attitude.

a soft and easy flow with a continuum of acceptance.

me likey!

*maybe you should describe your bike and post a picture
so we can send out a search party! stolen bicycle ... not cool.
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thanks bro! Smile

such as the nature of a freewrite... flowing


and sadly ive already accepted the bike loss.. its alrighty
with all this rain.. i think it was perfect timing
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Do you have any plans for this? Turn it into a poem or song or story? I like free-writes and stream of thought; mostly they're good netting for the dregs. I thought this was the most interesting line in your free-write.

"Refreshed and renewed, i dressed for the day and what it might throw at me."

Maybe you could expand on that. How does one get dressed or attire to be prepared for Day and its whimsically discriminating hurls. I mean is there a ritual (get dressed), or special garb (attire)? Does it help? How or how not?
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nope none.. cuz.. they come and they go..

well if its raining.. something waterproof.. and perhaps not your best shoes...

if its sunny.. some polarized sunny glasses.. Smile


sorry for the late response.. our forum commander.. changes stuff around so much

cheer... mate
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