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#1 Point Break 2: Legacy
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Hi again, sorry it took me a long time to make this. Hope you enjoy it. Smile

Point Break 2: The Wings of Night


Chapter 1: Planet PSP 4S

“Wake Up! Can you here me? Wake Up Evan!” Sleep
I was sleeping, the years of fighting with the aliens finally stopped. What happened on Earth doesn’t matter anymore. People evacuated from Earth to a new planet call PSP 4S. This planet had everything. Food, water, grass, plants, anything that could make our world healthy. “Wake up! You are going to miss the meeting.” said Lar. Lar was my assistant, he has been there for me since the last fight in L.A.

I am now the sergeant of my own team called Spartans 67. I only had 11 people in my team, but advanced people. Lar and I went to the meeting in the cafeteria and the chief of the army spoke. I was wondering what the meeting was about. “We will attack and find the planet or place of the aliens. I know we have a member here who has been in the first war in L.A. Evan will you please share your memories.”

Chapter 3: Memories

I was surprised and I remembered what happened in L.A. Many people died and I was basically the hero in that war. I stood up and grabbed a microphone. Right when I was about to speak, BOOM!!!!!!!!! The alarm when off and out of no where, aliens came and attacked us. Everyone grabbed their guns and started to attack and in front of my eyes, I see the chief getting shot.

The leader of the aliens name Runnies and I remember him from the war we fought back in L.A. I aimed for him first and fought him, Punches Troll but he was too strong. Knock Out “Stop! Capture the remaining people and put them in the UFO.” He looked at me happily. It looked like they wanted me mainly.

Chapter 4: Broken Item

When they took us outside, I saw the broken UFO from the war in L.A. It had a big chunk of metal gone, but it was still floating. I wonder how. They took us under the UFO and beam shined at us. We started to float into the UFO. When we got it, I cannot believe what I’ve seen.

I see people working like slaves and people, kids hanged. I never knew they were here in this UFO. They put me in a cage full of dirty and crazy people. I had to find a way to get out of this UFO.

Chapter 5: Idea

"Hey you! Are you Evan?" some guy asked. "Yes. How do you know me?" "You are famous. You are the one who destroyed this UFO." "It's not destroyed anymore. I'll find a way to destroy this UFO and everyone will be free.

I requested a cell for myself because I had a plan. So, they took me to a cell away from everyone. Hours later, I called a guard who is by himself. He went up to me and I choked him to death. I saw there uniform and they were outlandish. So I put one on and I started to act like them.

Chapter 6: Crash

I found an exit and I opened it. I looked down and we are far high from the ground, but we are at sea. I jumped and dove in the ocean. Lucky for me, I was near a city. I wanted to be able to shoot down the UFO.

I swam to shore and I was in an empty city. No one was there and I looked around. I saw a gun shop and I broke in. I grabbed a rocket launcher and missiles and headed outside. I locked on the UFO and shot the rocket launcher and it hit the UFO. It started to fall to the ground and CRASH!!!!!! Shocked

Chapter 7: Over

I ran towards the UFO and saw it on fire. There were people burning and running away with joy while the aliens grabbed their guns. I yelled
"HEY! OVER HERE!" They started to run towards me.

Out of nowhere, Spartans 67 stood next to me and tanks behind me. I knew this is the final war we are ever going to fight. We charged in and BOOOMMM!!!!

After hours of fighting we won. They are all dead and we finally won our victory! Days later, everything has changed. People are cheerful and full of joy. Peace is now in our world.
THANK YOU!

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@snowghost - yeah boy, I can tell your play with words have become more advance. I enjoy your stories and effort to entertain.

continue to create your stories...some day they may become comic books, movies, video games.

be sure to review and edit until you find it perfect, like I always say, if you read it out loud and it sounds perfect, you wrote it perfectly...


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